PERMISSIONS: To view the blog, post on it, and comment on posts, you must be invited. I will send you an email invitation to join the blog, and then you must follow the instructions to join up and begin posting. You can't join the blog without first creating a Google account.

POSTING: Post your poems by clicking "New Post" at the top right of the page. Paste your poem into the window.

LABELING: Then label the post with the assignment name (i.e., "confessional poem," "sonnet," etc.), your name (i.e., "Tony Barnstone," etc.), and the week (i.e., "week one," "week two," but not "week 1"--spell out your numbers). If you post a poem in week two that is due in week three, label it "week three." When you begin to type in a label, the program will fill it in for you, so your post will be labeled with the rest of the poems in the same category.

COMMENTING: Afterwards, you can "comment" on the posts of your classmates. Post "group one" and "group two" one-page critical responses as "comments" on the posted poems, but also print out copies for me and for the poet and give them to us in class.
Showing posts with label Ballad. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Ballad. Show all posts

Thursday, April 30, 2009

Ballad of Madonna [ballad about a famous person]

Kabbalah goddess whore
Entranced by old folk lore

adopted 12 black kids
they wish they all had S.I.D.S

from naked Cosmo looks
to writing children’s books

Britney spears tv kiss
tabloid ploy hit and miss

lots of money spent on tour
most of it on Ensure

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Sunny

Black on white and ink in skin

To burst upon the elbow.

Your face exists in photographs,

Your name upon my elbow.

 

Skittles and oreos, now on the floor

Brown stain still sits in rug.

You never yelled or raised your voice,

I threw up, I got a hug?

 

You’re not gone, you’re not dead,

But time is running out.

I want to stop your aging years,

“Don’t die,” I want to shout.

 

The sting, the numbness, I endured,

To make you permanent.

A hundred dollars is much to little,

For what the ink really meant.

 

Mom and Dad, did not approve,

Your brother especially.

They felt I left them off my frame,

The heart is where they’ll be.

 

To touch and burn the human flesh,

Is a sacrifice to me.

To show my respect and dying love,

So that you will see.

 

You’ve shaped and guided my short life,

From birth to this very day.

Murphy died I didn’t know,

How she use to play.

 

Don’t change, don’t stop, I miss you babe,

Your love I want to take.

If you let up, or ever stop;

The ink is a mistake.

Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Brennan, The Zamboni Driver

She smiled and pulled the trigger back,
a slam of sound did ring.
"Look what you've made me go and do.
Now take back your god damned ring."

Two bodies lay in the room with him
and hour before he rose
with cold hands that dripped with mistress blood
and stained sheets around his toes.

no sirens came to comfort him,
no lights or suits of blue.
He wished to God that there was time
to make this scene untrue.

He picked the magnum .45
up from the grisly floor.
He put it into his mouth and then
he shuddered to his core.

He had not resolve to join them both, but
his scarred face shows his regret;
His still pink wounds and patch of flesh
will not let him forget.

With ruined, shambled life and cast,
he left town without a word
and now he rides the great Zamboni,
but of this I'm sure you've heard.

He came to this town in hopes that he
could live without explaining
just what had brought him to live among us
or tell of all his failings.

Now watch yourself, don't let him know
of all the things I've told.
It's quite a shame what's happened to him
in his life so bleak and bold.

Thursday, March 19, 2009

Mere Anarchy is Loosed Upon the World

The falcon never heard his call,
it never wanted to.
It danced and it turned and it laughed
as man below withdrew.

One man in the pouring rain stood.
The falconer fell quiet,
as if struck on the hand by God.
The bird winged to a riot.

In the sky in their aeries high
the falcons spun and twirled.
At the highest point in their dance
they forgot man and his world.

But man made a point to show himself
when joy began to peak.
The avian armada flew
And left behind the weak.

Now scores of the sickest and sad
falcons are slaves once more.
Their brethren left them all behind,
they cried and looked for doors.

The falcon never heard his call,
It never had a chance.
It howled and it screeched and it shook
as man below advanced.

Of the free birds that kept their wings
if any still felt bold,
they would not show it in their eyes
with brothers in the cold.

All the free peoples of the earth--
the birds and beasts and bugs--
have lost their place, their space erased
by portly pink-fleshed thugs.