PERMISSIONS: To view the blog, post on it, and comment on posts, you must be invited. I will send you an email invitation to join the blog, and then you must follow the instructions to join up and begin posting. You can't join the blog without first creating a Google account.

POSTING: Post your poems by clicking "New Post" at the top right of the page. Paste your poem into the window.

LABELING: Then label the post with the assignment name (i.e., "confessional poem," "sonnet," etc.), your name (i.e., "Tony Barnstone," etc.), and the week (i.e., "week one," "week two," but not "week 1"--spell out your numbers). If you post a poem in week two that is due in week three, label it "week three." When you begin to type in a label, the program will fill it in for you, so your post will be labeled with the rest of the poems in the same category.

COMMENTING: Afterwards, you can "comment" on the posts of your classmates. Post "group one" and "group two" one-page critical responses as "comments" on the posted poems, but also print out copies for me and for the poet and give them to us in class.

Thursday, March 26, 2009

You’re long and thin and golden through,

And bend as breeze may push you so.

A collage of stalks upright they stand,

The sun reflects a calming glow.

 

Your tips and tops will flower up,

So small they bloom form tips of wires.

An ocean of cattails waving high,

The water looked like a million fires.

 

You’re insignificant alone,

But with abundance and your flower.

Ground into stone until powder,

Your form becomes a different flour.

 

You’re helpful in the kitchen now,

To make a loaf, add water, make dough.

Till golden brown on cusp of bread

You’ll bake until I tell you so.

 

Why we broke you down one sunny day,

Will lie in mind for years to come.

Had we not and left you alone,

You’d drown me in your plain boredom.

 

You’re more then fires upon the tails,

Of cats running through your rolling hills.

How gold and bold you sold your self,

to be taken away to mills.

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